Comorat's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tribute to Choo Choo]

Nice......for the right reasons

Well, you've made your point young lady. THE VOTING SYSTEM SUCKORS THE AZZ CRAK!!!!

In the old days this wouldn't have survived, but now...<shrug>.

Great experiment though, thats what gets you a 10 for style. Lets see, I think I'll give this a 5 cause I can. ;)

[Double K.O.]

Not a bad start

Well, you've got graphics down....now try adding sound, a preloader (if you need one) a "stop" command at the end so it doesn't repeat forever, a plot, some character back ground and maybe some music.

I know that sounds like alot to ask for but this really is a very good start, even if it is reminicent of DBZ which is way over used here.

D-e-W responds:

if youve got any pointers you want to discuss you can email me, and thanks

[[old] Splinter Cell Spoof]

I'm still laughing

HA HA HA HA HAAA!!!!!!!!! That was great. I hate that goddamn game, thankfully I only rented it. Boring boring boring.....this spoof is by far much more entertaining than the game could ever be. Great job. HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!

[Rival Part 2: Escape]

I'd say Stockwell is fucked.....LOL

Outstanding job wih this. My god, why are you wasting your time posting this treasure to this fucking website. Screw these retards, they aren't worthy of your work. Great story, great animation, great sound. Very very professional. Did I mention that I like this? I'd love to know what program you used for the 3-D and shading. I've been looking for a good one and haven't had much luck. If you could shoot me a quick email with what you used that'd be great. Again, great job with this.

[The Clock War: Part II]

Nice

However, a few rookie N00B mistakes will ruin a good flash everytime. How is it that so much work and talent can go into this yet there is no preloader? How is it that you can spend so much time planning yet you didn't take the time to notice the music is too loud to hear the voices and the text is damn near impossible to read due to it's size? Did you not notice or simpley not care or did you figure it didn't matter because the other clocks would vote this to the top slot anyway? Granted compared to the other bullshit that gets submitted this is a work of art, but standing toe to toe with other quality flash this wouldn't stand a chance.

Good effort, good movie, average final product poor debugging/editing.

FUClock responds:

First off, both Clock War movies lack preloaders because of their immense filesize. This leaves the viewer open to stream the movie if they wish. The music is quite loud, and does dwarf some of the less needed text, in which case you should look at the subtitles. In the case of the subtitles' size, I didn't want to make them any larger than size twelve because I felt that would intrude on the movie. I'm sorry my movie was such a disappointment to you.

[Wonderlick: Episode 4]

These need to change

I'm having a hard time with these "wonder lick" toons. On one hand they are well drawn, some definate work has gone into them and you are apparently very dedicated to the series. On the other hand they are STUPID! Each episode is way too short to tell much of a stroy yet so incredibly pointless and dull that it's painful to sit through the whole thing. I've even tried watching them all back to back and it doesn't help. I guess a dancing retarded snoopy with a long tounge just doesn't get me moving in the morning, especially when it doesn't talk or really DO anything. And now theres a bus load of other pointless animals on thier way to "the city" greeaaaat. Can't wait to see how this pans out. I'm hoping for some more plot or action or SOMETHING so I don't have to vote low on the next one.

[crazy fight]

Huh?

So I guess I have to determine fro myself that "cough cough" means fucking pointless and lame where you come from?

[FDA - ASSWARP]

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG

This is by far the best damn thing I have EVER seen on this site. Unfuckingbelievable!!!! OMG, I can;t type....must calm down, must study the movie...must become as good a flash artist as these guys.

Outstanding, this is classic, a true masterpiece and the reason I come back to this site. Thank you.

[Milieu Project]

It's ok I guess.

The graphics are a little privative and the sound needs to be toned down some but I guess it would be ok for a website intro. I'm getting some environmentalist/greenpeace/tr ee hugger vibe from it which I don't particulary care for but that didn't influance my vote any. Just clean it up some if you are going to use it online, your work represents you after all.

[car slideshow]

Not bad but needs work

Ok.....um...

I'm not sure what i was expecting from this but what I got wasn't it. Instead of slamming this as crap I am going to offer some suggestions.

1)Next time don't use pics from the internet that anybody could look up.
2) Stream the music, don't just slap a huge MP3 file in the first frame and expect things to work.
3)Use some basic action script to put a stop command in the last frame so it doesn't repeat forever.
4)Pre-loader pre-loader pre-loader.
5) Try optimizing your sound quality to cut the file size down some. 3.2 meg is way to big for what this is.

Don't get me wrong, it's ok for a first time effort, just not great.