Comorat's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mafia Story: Chapter 1]

Damnit Matt, you got some SKILLS boy.

This great. I laughed my ass off....
<bang> oh hey that was unexpected. LOL
Great job, the only flaw I see is that the sound tapers off a little at the end, I had to keep turning up my volume and then when the end music kicked it I got blasted. Other than that I laughed and fully enjoyed this.
Great job, keep these coming.

MattShaw responds:

Eeeexcellent... glad you enjoyed it, and gimmie another few weeks to get the next one done, I'm back at school soon :(

[Sex machine 2002]

Oooof...that was painfully bad...

A little funny but still really bad. Not long for this portal Im afraid.

B-Clock responds:

Oh well, there is alwase next time. I just dont understand how humor can be a five and graphics a one yet my overall is still O :(

[Spide-Man: is he ghey?]

Nice....no, the part you didnt do.

This was really great, except for the fact that all you did was import a well animated gif someone else did months ago. The part you drew was 3rd grade at best. Good song though and the file size was nice and small.

The spelling thing though, come on dude. Its played out, old, passe', been done, OVER.

So all in all, blam!

themaskedman responds:

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[Drop the bombshell]

Ok.............

1)Trailers never do good on NewGrounds, its better to wait until you have a finished product.
2)I've got a cable modem jacked into a 1.6 Ghz pent 4 with 512 megs of DDR Ram and the words STILL dont match the faces. Adjusting the quality doesnt do anything, the only thing thats going to fix it is you. I also had a bunch of trouble trying to get this to load fully but I think that has more to do with the NG server not your flash.

So even though this doesnt deserve it, Im giving it a 5 to keep it alive for now. Right now its got 2 votes of 0 against it which I personally think is unfair. My advice is to spend alot more time debugging and editing before you submit next time.
The art work is really good though.

Zelgodes905 responds:

Thx alot for you info, i'm currently tweeking it now

[.my intro]

Nice

This is cool, nice and smooth and the sound matches just right. The only improvement I would make would be to speed it up a little bit, just because of the short attention spans most viewers have. Good job though. Id like to make something like this for myself.

kal7lundy responds:

Thank you, yeah i know i need to speed it up but i was afraid i fuck the whole thing up. wish more people reviewed like you, thanks